Post by Ryou on May 24, 2010 17:06:39 GMT -5
Thought I post this here seeing as this could use some more threads..
Please don't be too harsh on me. I wrote this when I was 12.
Ryou was a usual guy. He lived on his home planet peacefully. He had a girlfriend and was respected. His life was just about perfect until one day, when his life chenged forever.
Ryou was sitting in the library reading as usual when his girlfriend Sarah walked in
"Reading again huh." "Doesnt surprise me."
"Shut up" Ryou replied.
She smiled and sat down next to me and said "aw Ry you know I'm only kiddin'" She said as she gave him a look of "don't get so evil with me!"
"It's ok." He said and then went back to his book.
"So do you know what day it is today?" she asked him with a smile
"Yeah the festival of the light" he replied without even looking up
"And!" she yelled her temper growing
"Don't think anything else" he replied going back to his book
"Oh really! Do you even pay attention? By the way, what are you reading?" she asked with a tone of "how dare you not know what day it is".
"The usual. New worlds, superpowers and other things.."
"Why do you read that stuff? It's not true." she said getting angrier and angrier
"You think so but I believe they exist."
"Well when you are done maybe you'll figure out what you forgot!" she yelled as she stormed off.
"Did I forget something?" he wondered "Oh well.." he muttered as he went back to his book.
He came out of the library long after the festival had ended. So, he decided to go over to Sarah's and beg for forgiveness. When he got there was an ambulance. Ryou's eyes bulged and he ran to her house. He knocked on the door and her father answered.
"Is she ok." he asked worried
"The doctors can't explain it. I can't explain it. No one knows what happened… You better go see her. Maybe she'll get better if she sees you." Her father said inviting Ryou in.
He went into her room. She looked up at him. Smiled and then passed on.
When the funeral came Ryou was the one who stood in the back listening to every word the minister said. When the funeral was over, he stood by her grave and started to cry.
"Why! Why!" he cried. "If I had only listened to her… Why couldn't it have been me! I would do anything to get her back!" He yelled.
"Anything?" came a voice as if out of nowhere. "Would you really do anything for her" a man said rising from the ground.
"I would but who the hell are you?" Ryou asked
"My name is Mephisto. I am the ruler of hell. Would you be really willing to do anything to save her?" he smirked.
"Anything you name it!" he said pompously.
"Fight me." he said throwing Ryou a sword. "If you win you'll win her back, but if you lose your entire planet will suffer and she will be mine forever."
"Deal!" he replied trying to raise the sword he was given. Mephisto drew his own sword. They fought for about five seconds before Mephisto ripped Ryou in two. Mephisto laughed and drug Ryou to hell. He healed him and Ryou blinked.
"What happened? I thought I died?" Ryou gasped.
"Well you lost, naturally, and now, I'm going to humiliate you and destroy you. Plus, your planet." Mephisto replied with a devilish grin.
"Wait, please! Just take me don't hurt anyone else!" Ryou begged.
"Hah you doomed your planet the minute you made the deal." he replied and bound Ryou to a table. He then started cutting off Ryou's limbs and replacing them with robotic parts. Ryou was screaming in agony, and Mephisto just laughed. Then he came to his head. He sawed it off nice and slowly. He then took out his brain and turned it into a microchip. He put it into the newly formed robotic head and turned Ryou on.
"You will now forever live in the guilt that you destroyed your home. You will be known as Alpha 0 and become my servant." Mephisto laughed. He brought up a screen to show Ryou what was happening to his homeworld. Ryou watched in horror as his planet was frozen solid. All of his family, friends, and people were frozen forever. Afterwards Mephisto released Ryou back on his planet.
Please don't be too harsh on me. I wrote this when I was 12.
Ryou was a usual guy. He lived on his home planet peacefully. He had a girlfriend and was respected. His life was just about perfect until one day, when his life chenged forever.
Ryou was sitting in the library reading as usual when his girlfriend Sarah walked in
"Reading again huh." "Doesnt surprise me."
"Shut up" Ryou replied.
She smiled and sat down next to me and said "aw Ry you know I'm only kiddin'" She said as she gave him a look of "don't get so evil with me!"
"It's ok." He said and then went back to his book.
"So do you know what day it is today?" she asked him with a smile
"Yeah the festival of the light" he replied without even looking up
"And!" she yelled her temper growing
"Don't think anything else" he replied going back to his book
"Oh really! Do you even pay attention? By the way, what are you reading?" she asked with a tone of "how dare you not know what day it is".
"The usual. New worlds, superpowers and other things.."
"Why do you read that stuff? It's not true." she said getting angrier and angrier
"You think so but I believe they exist."
"Well when you are done maybe you'll figure out what you forgot!" she yelled as she stormed off.
"Did I forget something?" he wondered "Oh well.." he muttered as he went back to his book.
He came out of the library long after the festival had ended. So, he decided to go over to Sarah's and beg for forgiveness. When he got there was an ambulance. Ryou's eyes bulged and he ran to her house. He knocked on the door and her father answered.
"Is she ok." he asked worried
"The doctors can't explain it. I can't explain it. No one knows what happened… You better go see her. Maybe she'll get better if she sees you." Her father said inviting Ryou in.
He went into her room. She looked up at him. Smiled and then passed on.
When the funeral came Ryou was the one who stood in the back listening to every word the minister said. When the funeral was over, he stood by her grave and started to cry.
"Why! Why!" he cried. "If I had only listened to her… Why couldn't it have been me! I would do anything to get her back!" He yelled.
"Anything?" came a voice as if out of nowhere. "Would you really do anything for her" a man said rising from the ground.
"I would but who the hell are you?" Ryou asked
"My name is Mephisto. I am the ruler of hell. Would you be really willing to do anything to save her?" he smirked.
"Anything you name it!" he said pompously.
"Fight me." he said throwing Ryou a sword. "If you win you'll win her back, but if you lose your entire planet will suffer and she will be mine forever."
"Deal!" he replied trying to raise the sword he was given. Mephisto drew his own sword. They fought for about five seconds before Mephisto ripped Ryou in two. Mephisto laughed and drug Ryou to hell. He healed him and Ryou blinked.
"What happened? I thought I died?" Ryou gasped.
"Well you lost, naturally, and now, I'm going to humiliate you and destroy you. Plus, your planet." Mephisto replied with a devilish grin.
"Wait, please! Just take me don't hurt anyone else!" Ryou begged.
"Hah you doomed your planet the minute you made the deal." he replied and bound Ryou to a table. He then started cutting off Ryou's limbs and replacing them with robotic parts. Ryou was screaming in agony, and Mephisto just laughed. Then he came to his head. He sawed it off nice and slowly. He then took out his brain and turned it into a microchip. He put it into the newly formed robotic head and turned Ryou on.
"You will now forever live in the guilt that you destroyed your home. You will be known as Alpha 0 and become my servant." Mephisto laughed. He brought up a screen to show Ryou what was happening to his homeworld. Ryou watched in horror as his planet was frozen solid. All of his family, friends, and people were frozen forever. Afterwards Mephisto released Ryou back on his planet.